Historical Essays

 

 

 

     Throughout the year you will be asked to compose short essay answers on a variety of topics and questions.  These essays will not only help you better understand the historical content discussed in class, but also improve your writing skills.  Short essays will be turned in for a grade and ultimately end up in your History binder.  This handout describes the proper way to write a high quality short essay answer.  You are always expected to do your best and to turn in quality work.  The information discussed below can be used as a guideline to help you with short essay assignments.  You should also remember to include proper punctuation, capitalization, and spelling in your short essay answers.

     Mr. Gigliotti will often present you with short essay questions.  A short essay question can usually be answered in one well written paragraph.  A well written paragraph contains at least five quality sentences.  Good essays also consist of three main parts: (1) a topic sentence, (2) supporting details, and (3) a conclusion.  Every good paragraph starts with a topic sentence.  The topic sentence introduces what will be discussed within the paragraph.  Supporting details give specific information about the topic which you are discussing.  Most paragraphs contain three to five sentences of supporting details.  Finally every good paragraph also includes a conclusion.  The conclusion summarizes what was discussed within the paragraph.  Think of a sandwich, your topic sentence and your conclusion represent the two pieces of bread, while the meat, cheese, and fixings inside take the form of the supporting details.  Below you will find an example of all of these parts in action!

 

Example Short Essay Question: “What were the main causes of the Civil War?”

 

Quality Short Essay Answer:

   The Civil War was caused by a number of different factors including Uncle Tom’s Cabin, the Dred Scott decision, and the Election of 1860. (Topic Sentence – This sentence introduces the topic and tells the reader that there are 3 causes you will be discussing.)  Uncle Tom’s Cabin was a book written by Harriet Beacher stow which exposed many northerners to the horrors of slavery for the first time.  The Dred Scott decision was also a cause of the Civil War when the Supreme Court declared slavery constitutional.  Finally, Abraham Lincoln’s election in 1860 was a major cause of the Civil War because southerners feared Lincoln’s views about slavery.  (Supporting details – These are the same causes you indicated in the topic sentence.  Here you explained each one specifically).  Uncle Tom’s Cabin, the Dred Scott decision, the Election of 1860, and many other factors were major causes of the Civil War.  (Conclusion – This sentence summed up what was discussed and neatly ended the paragraph).

 

How will these short essay assignments be graded? 

These assignments will be graded on a four point system similar to how students will be graded on the Ohio Graduation Test.  The following criteria will be used to assess each essay.

 

0 Points (F)

Little if any attempt was made to answer the question with historical facts and application skills or the essay is incomplete and/or missing.  This essay must be redone for any credit. L

1 Points (D)

The essay indicates that the student is unaware of the historical facts associated with the question and/or did not apply the material appropriately when responding. Essay must be redone L

2 Points (C)

The essay indicates that the student is unaware of many historical facts associated with the question and/or did not apply the material appropriately when responding. Essay must be redone L

3 Points (B)

The essay indicates that the student is aware of some historical facts associated with the question and/or did not apply the material when answering the question.  Good Job! J

4 Points (A)

The essay clearly indicates that the student is aware of numerous historical facts associated with the question and can apply the material when answering the question. Well Done! J

 

  

 

Historical Essays

 

     During most units of study, Mr. Gigliotti will assign short essay questions based on the material discussed in class.  These “BIG QUESTIONS” must be answered on one sheet of clean notebook paper and neatly hand written.  Students must also rewrite the question and include the date each question was assigned.  Students will be able to find information about the essay topics from their guided class notes, class discussions and activities, text book, and web page. 

     Collectively, these “BIG QUESTIONS” will make up the student’s “History Journal” throughout the year and will be saved in their History Binder.  Usually, Mr. Gigliotti will give students time each day near the end of class to write their essays.  Students are expected to use this class time to write and edit their work.  At various times, students must choose their very best essay, edit and improve their work, and then neatly type that essay in a word processing program.  The typed essay should represent the student’s best work and should be printed out and stapled to the clean notebook paper containing all of the “Big Questions”.  This should be then turned into Mr. Gigliotti.  Students will be asked to redo poorly done or incomplete papers. 

 

Follow the steps below to ensure proper completion of such assignments:

1.  Copy down the “Big Question” of the day in your agenda book.

2.  Pay close attention to class discussion, notes, assignments, and readings.

3.  Handwrite each essay near the end of the class period.  All of the “Big Questions” should be

     placed on one sheet of clean notebook paper and include the date it was

     assigned.  The paper should also contain the proper heading (see example below).

4.  Choose the short essay that represents your best work and further edit the essay to

     improve its overall quality.  You should have a friend or parent proofread your work.

5.  Use a word processing program to type your best essay.  Be sure to follow the correct

     format (see example below).

6.  Print out your essay and staple it to your clean notebook paper.  Turn both into Mr. Gigliotti on

     the specific due date assigned.